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What I am looking at

  • Writer: Wren Jones
    Wren Jones
  • Apr 2
  • 1 min read

I had to create an equivalent for what I felt about what I was looking at – not copy it.

Georgia O’Keefe


You are no copy, Ms. O’Keefe

fierce

feline

focussed

defining femtastic


women scripted

to tight lines, hemming curtains,

raising children—kept half awake

in a fake empire,

but you painted new worlds

with regal brush strokes

demonstrated in colour

and in life, there are 

lots of ways

to be a woman


in your later years

staring into the camera

unflinching

free

skin worn and wrinkled. 

hair white and worldly.

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NaPrWriMo prompt: Taking Anne Carson’s translation as an example, we challenge you to write a poem that directly addresses someone , and that includes a made-up word, an odd/unusual simile, a statement of “fact,” and something that seems out of place in time (like a Sonny & Cher song in a poem about a Greek myth).



Georgia O'Keefe, Nature Forms
Georgia O'Keefe, Nature Forms


©2025 by Wren Jones.

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