What I am looking at
- Wren Jones
- Apr 2
- 1 min read
I had to create an equivalent for what I felt about what I was looking at – not copy it.
Georgia O’Keefe
You are no copy, Ms. O’Keefe
fierce
feline
focussed
defining femtastic
women scripted
to tight lines, hemming curtains,
raising children—kept half awake
in a fake empire,
but you painted new worlds
with regal brush strokes
demonstrated in colour
and in life, there are
lots of ways
to be a woman
in your later years
staring into the camera
unflinching
free
skin worn and wrinkled.
hair white and worldly.
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NaPrWriMo prompt: Taking Anne Carson’s translation as an example, we challenge you to write a poem that directly addresses someone , and that includes a made-up word, an odd/unusual simile, a statement of “fact,” and something that seems out of place in time (like a Sonny & Cher song in a poem about a Greek myth).

